Griffinkeeper

What is wrong with their ears?

Sounds like a pretty short story to me. I'm worried because I didn't see anything to make the story different from any of the 89 million suicide stories out there.

I'd use a glossary more for describing unique devices. One of the things I enjoy reading is about Battletech, which spawned the famous Mechwarrior games. They have a glossary in ...

Useful translations - Gorah ai - a traditional Sidhe greeting Nai - Sidhe equivalent of 'No' carys - my heart, or beloved in Sidhe I'm sorry, this is one of ...

This is a nice outline. It sounds like some of the events come too easily, but I'll reserve this until you post an actual chapter from the work. Although the ...

"Ah, that's the good part of it all, I'm not married and my parents have been dead for a long while." - Seeker What is your home/labratory/secret hide-out like?

CL!

*Bumps up the rating to R.* When you use F bombs, it goes to R, Okay?

~Grif Sylver~ "I take it this means you won't just let us leave," I said. "Unfortunately no," Damien said. "So you mean to kill us?" "Not immediately." "That's reassuring. You ...

Do you think you could get rid of some the hyphens? It is really screwing up my browser when it's displayed on the front page.

I once fenced for three days. Fortunately, I was evenly matched. Cool stuff!

YES! Nobody stopping this site!

anyway now thanks to you i will have to wait until the end of the year for BOTH of his stories, i was only here to read his stories, so ...

That also a bad way to take a critique. The best way is to use it, not leave writing forever. No one starts an excellent writer, one has to work ...

A lot of what you said seemed mildly ridiculous. A lot of what you questioned should have been obvious, in fact every single person who has read it before you ...