Griffinkeeper

This is a TYWC style Storybook RPG, as set out in this thread Rules: 1. All posts must be run through the spellchecker; regardless of how well a speller you ...

Pride & Prejudice definitely. I also like "The Art of War" by Sun Tzu. It was written by a guy named Sun Tzu. Even though it was written a couple ...

It's okay. It will be compared to Harry Potter anyways. What you shouldn't have is closely resembled characters. If I see a scar or jet-black hair on our witch, I'm ...

Is it just me, or have capitalization ceased to exist? For the benefit of this thread and for humanity in general, let's demonstrate some understanding of 5th grade English, preferably ...

This is going into the entertainment forums. Literary forums are reserved for stories and poems, not discussions. *Moved*

It isn't merely an issue of spelling, but of readability in general. The sheer amount of randomness makes it difficult to navigate, let alone determine what is important and what ...

I've been lazy I know. Anyways, the Member of the Week is Adam101! Ever since he joined, I've been seeing the rat avatar everywhere I go! With a stunning 11 ...

Bad spelling. Also, this doesn't really seem to be interesting reading. Novels tell a story, but this diary seems to be more of a random blog entry than any fluid ...

The readability was really difficult, your big paragraphs usually could be broken into several paragraphs (remember one paragraph=1 Topic Sentence and 4+ details for the topic sentence). It wasn't rea

i don't get it how was I bad mouthing Micheal , if you mean when i said his story was crap several times that was a joke , also an ...

He turned and was looking up at the gunman's face, filled with fury. "What is that phone doing on the floor," he said calmly. Wait a minute, one moment the ...

~Grif Sylver~ Damien ran with the girl as the larger sith group approached. There was no time to get the answer for my question. "Out of the way Jedi," the ...

Nope. However, you could contact an admin and ask them if they will change it for you. They have the orange names. Don't ask moderators, we only deal with posts. ...

Time for part 2. I can remember the night my brother went missing as clear as ever, even today . 1. There is no reason for this to be included ...

y es. so any crit you guys wnat to leave, it would be lovely Alright, in order: 1. You didn't capitalize the first letter of the sentence. Come on, this ...