Griffinkeeper

Ouch! Okay, it seems I need to re-work a couple of stories.

Well, I'm a Griffinkeeper, but I imagine it is close enough. As for the rest of it... *shudders*. Welcome! If you need any help, just talk to the members of ...

youre right , im a terrible writer but ill still try untill im told im c***.then ill just give up. thanks for bieng honest, ill take more time making sence ...

Would you like to elaborate on this piece a little bit?

How can writing survive on paper? It is a lot easier to send out copies (heck, to even make copies!) using the computer than it would be in any other ...

"Everybody has something to hiiide! ...Except for me and my monkey!" My secret is that I'm not really a gryphon. This perilous position is reserved for my characters.

For a moment, I thought YWS was under attack by spammers. I don't know why, but I'm happy to see it's a false alarm. Anyway, I don't like poems that ...

Thanks CL! I changed most of it, with this exception. For as I chose in life, so I would choose in death; how I would draw my final breath. This ...

Thank you very much! I edited it to reflect your observations. I hope they're satisfactory.

Well, just to clear things up... First off, the two folks in the scene are Seeker and the Griffinkeeper. The Griffinkeeper, being the clever person he is, has unwittingly arranged ...

Wow, an essayist. There aren't many of you around at all. I think that is sad, but it makes you all the more special. Write on!

Being a lady, acting quite bravely, she yelled at him loudly to go. I think loudly kind of slows the pace of the sentence too fast. Llama is right also, ...

I'd appreciate some constructive criticism. I know it needs work, but I don't know how to fix it. Also, this may or may not be in the right forum, so ...

I don't get it. Ha ha?

Not re-reading books to me is like listening to a song only one time. The reason I re-read is because my perspective of a story is changing as I become ...