Griffinkeeper

Fear. He licked his lips as he tasted it. She was young, fresh, and so tender, but not for much longer. The bruises were a bright purple. She was crying, ...

Trust me DQ, everything in this story is highly exaggerated or outright made up. Your character is no exception. Were this to be completely realistic, the story would be much ...

When will you English folks convert to American? Anyways, I enjoyed the humorous nature of it, it was a lot of fun to read.

Freeflowing is great for practice, but for a serious story, I would use an outline. This is the first time I've seen an author work on an outline before starting ...

I'm busiest when I'm preparing my meat. It takes a lot of work to strip down an entire deer and if you don't pay attention, you might ruin your dinner. ...

In general: Your structure is bad. This needs to be properly formatted into paragraphs, not the blob of text it is now. Also, how is this Action/Adventure? As far as ...

(Jigsaw, I was out of ideas. Unless you want me to put them on swivel prayer mats... Didn't think so.) The Miata had only parked when the bus rammed it. ...

Farewell Bobo. Good days and good times.

I edited it so that it wouldn't skew the main page so much. I just got rid of some of the spaces between "Sly Flame", "A Play in One Act", ...

First, what is a smart person. Is it a person that has a wide breadth of knowledge or a wide depth of knowledge? Or is it someone with both qualities? ...

Chuck Norris? I voted monkey. If you give a dragon a keyboard, they'll just destroy your computer. Give a keyboard to a monkey and you'll eventually have Shakespeare's Hamlet. I ...

It didn't take long for the Miata to figure out it was being followed. A reckless bus isn't covert by any means, especially on city streets. Silent Aviator was in ...

Thanks for enlightening these...unpatriots...Nate. Come on, Galatea, show some respect. George W. Bush is our President , and you could a least try a little tact. The fact that none ...

Tiren was pleased with the town. He had managed to organize them into groups. The fires were now out, salvage operations were being done, and re-construction was beginning. Then the ...

Life is hard to understand as it is. But it’s even harder to understand how people think when they’re right at that pivotal age between kid and adult. In other ...