Griffinkeeper

She runs though the sky, tired but determined. Who? As though free of the world she forgets the suffering and pain she has [s]e[/s] i nflicted upon her [s]own[/s] town ...

Article Here. Insurgents are now kidnapping victims, booby trapping their vehicles, and then release them, telling them to drive a certain road. Then, the terrorists remotely detonate the bomb, killin

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All right is the formal version. It is used with formal pieces of writing and editing. Alright is informal and is used in dialogue. So in this case it works. ...

Paragraphing is an ongoing process throughout the story. It's a part of grammar. You don't just use periods at the beginning of the story, but at the end of every ...

The Warthogs parked next to a ladder. The Commandos piled out and Master Chief and Cortana followed. "Alright, just up this ladder and we should be in the street in ...

I didn't like the Starship trooper angle, so it's been changed.

What is Lolita about, very generally speaking?

One of the things I always enjoyed watching while I was growing up was A-Team. It was a really silly show, with serious commando missions. Yet it had a quality ...

I edited the rating, so it shows it now. There was some problems a while back, let Nate know if there is any further problems with it.

Welcome to YWS. I'm Grif and I'm one of the mods here. If you have anymore questions, just send it to me or another member of big brother.

And now, a SPEW Commando welcome. "Hi! This hello will self-destruct in five...four...three..."

So many articulate newbies... I want to cry. I'm Grif, one of the moderators here. I hope you enjoy the site. If you find any nasty things, just send me ...

Welcome to YWS. I've seen your comments on some of the stories; it shows good writing karma.

Some of the newbies are posting some really neat stuff. My impressions of the characters: The spymaster was kind of likeable, but he talked too much. Spies make a living ...