Griffinkeeper

GAH! MY EYES! THEY'RE BLEEDING! CHAT LANGUAGE NOT 1337!

Granted, but then you'll be an insufferable know-it-all, which will prompt the ninja assassins. I wish I was the most miserable person in the world, then I'd have something to ...

Dude, not cool. Calling another member a gay republican or a stoned non-partisan? Not the funniest of jokes.

Granted, but you might find out more than you want to know. I wish I could eat cake!

Oh go change your signature LamaLama.

Age is an excuse, so let's not focus on it. Your writing is good, but it can be much better. I'm sensing that this story isn't so well thought out, ...

This isn't a prologue. This entire thing is showing how all these characters joined up to form this elite group. That would be the LOTR equivalent of the first half ...

Indeed, Scott thought himself a huge idiot. His drill sergeant seemed to agree. "Well if this isn't the saddest bunch of recruits I've ever gotten. I have to train you ...

The thing that always makes my eyes close (or even better, cringe) is when things go horribly wrong. Not the sudden "oh look! We're captured!" but the progressively worse kind ...

Oddly enough, going to my blog is enough to get me interested in writing. Certain types of music gives me certain types of writing. Halo music always induces an Action ...

Indeed, your comments referring to fox are completely unwarranted and irrelevent to the conversation. Firstly, at no point in time was Fox ever brought up as a source. Jiggity made ...

Hopefully this isn't going too fast...

The chopper blades drowned out most of the conversation. Santana was thinking about the mission. The Cartel was rich, rich enough to hire mercenaries. Mercenaries themselves weren't especially well tr

*Winces* Cliches, grammar, plot, it's all too much. *SLAMS HEAD INTO KEYBOARD*

Pastor Haggart has admitted to a homosexual relationship. Source The big question is how it will effect the election on Tuesday. In any event, we may now call him a ...