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Re: Shotgun
Rated PG.
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Against the world
Gray and Grey are both acceptable spellings for the color. The only difference between them is which side of the Atlantic you happen to be on. Incan is giving constructive ...
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Fools' Duel: Curiosity Killed The Cats
Rated PG-13. Being buried alive is pretty intense.
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Untitled
Rated G.
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Full Metal Alchemist
I think this belongs under entertainment.
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Oooohhh...
This is random. *Moved to Randomness.*
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: james in love
Just a note about the font. First, why is the color red? Is this because it's symbolic of something or did you think "hey, I like the color red. Therefore, ...
Nov 28, 2006 -
Re: Who do you admire?
I admire gryphons. The combination of wisdom and courage is a rare thing to behold. When it is combined there is nothing that can stop them. I also admire people ...
Nov 27, 2006 -
Re: Harry Potter
If that was her only trick, you wouldn't long hold the book. A good opening can not save a book if the rest of the book is terrible. The type ...
Nov 26, 2006 -
Re: Unruly Antagonists
Antagonists need not be evil, they could easily be rivals. If your character wants to be on the good side, let him. Whatever he is fighting against is the new ...
Nov 21, 2006 -
Re: Faith Fallen
As always, run spelling and grammar checks. Prologue: A Wicked Pact A hellish gleam sprung from the pages, as if the unusual paper’s very fabric consisted of some otherworldly power. ...
Nov 20, 2006 -
Re: Parents Sue Starbucks Over Child's Burn
"skin on Rachel's leg was falling off of her." That, my friends, is an instant third degree burn. A first degree will fry skin cells, a second degree will form ...
Nov 20, 2006 -
Re: Elf Son
“Welcome.” The king boomed as Thomas entered the room. “Hello.” Thomas nervously replied. He had not been in the king’s presence for quite a while, he noticed, which is why ...
Nov 19, 2006 -
Re: The Blessed
Dee-mee-tree. It's a russian name.
Nov 19, 2006 -
Re: Bluebird
There doesn't seem to be any conflict behind this story. Even the lucid visions don't make up for the fact that it's just some guy wondering about a bird. Then, ...
Nov 19, 2006
