Griffinkeeper

Cool, I can't wait to read more.

Rated PG, since there is some stuff like death and car crashes. When in doubt, rate above what it is. Of course you could just rate your own stuff.

"Twenty tangos, you ready Santana?" "After you Holland," Santana said. Crouching low, they ran across the roof towards the door. Without missing a beat, they went through the door. They ...

Rated G.

"Position comprimised!" Holland yelled at Santana. "No f***ing way!" Santana muttered, as bullets impacted around them. ""Looks like intel buggered this one up," Holland said. "They knew we were comin

Santana moved to keep up with Holland. He held his XM-8 at the ready, scanning from left to right. A man popped into view, Holland quickly raised his gun and ...

I'll yield to your post.

I don't think there is any harm with putting up a website if it deals with a certain problem. We don't want spammers, s'all.

Most of the time I get a very detailed review (mostly by Snoink) so while I don't get many, the few I do get are thorough. I really should post ...

The plane flew low in. "Looks like they bribed the right officials. No hails from the Colombians," Nate said to himself quietly. "Gentleman, we'll be landing in twenty minutes." "Roger." ...

Poor Imp is the featured member! With 12164 points, many of us are wondering what she does when she isn't on YWS. :lol: Congratulations to a job well done.

Even though this is a writing site, it is also a writing site for young and aspiring writers. As such, we want them to develop into better authors. Encouragement can ...

I thought the repetition of Betrayed Overwhelmed disbelief was very annoying. It is being used as a frame, but it doesn't work. A poem can stand on its own if ...

HOLY COW! Way to go Brad!

First, I read the story. Then, depending on how bad the story is, I ritually sacrifice a certain number of cute baby kittens. A ten kitten story is rare, but ...