Griffinkeeper

Learning something = growth. Doing the same thing over and over and over... = dead. I don't think this plot is really decent at all, I don't think that it ...

Inactive characters become NPC's. Killing off characters is frowned upon, since people can disappear for days, weeks, and months. Trust me, it happens. I'd rather have the character continue as ...

Not good, a character that doesn't grow is a stagnant character. Stagnant characters aren't good because they don't create any conflict. How about this for Seraph? Seraph been doing the ...

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Everyone took the left fork. Alden took flight and flew above the heroes. A forest was up ahead. Far ahead, a flock of birds suddenly came up from the canopy. ...

A story can not possibly succeed if the characters are boring. So, let's avoid boring characters. We can avoid them by figuring out how our characters grow, where they are ...

As to which fork in the road do we take: I'm thinking that we could either take the Left fork, maybe rescue some straggling pioneers who are being ambushed by ...

The other heroes all answered in the affirmative. Valin and Seraph seemed skeptical. Still, Alden was glad to be out of the throne room. He was impatient for the adventure ...

Second Page Summary The heroes met the King. Things got tense when Valin wouldn't bow to the King, but Seraph managed to calm things down. Check the second page for ...

ZZAP, your multiple personalities are acting up again.

I'm Grif and I'm here to help. The first thing I noticed about this story was that it was very hard to follow the movements of the characters. This is ...

When the introductions had finished, the King rose. "Eight great heroes inhabit this hall. Each with wisdom, strength, and power. The task ahead of you will require all of these ...

Welcome to the Jungle. Make sure you check the bananas and coconuts for further information. Send parrots to me or any of the other tigers if you have any questions ...

Maybe both?

Didn't know I needed permission, but if you guys don't mind, my sturdy dwarf shall enter the fray. You're more than welcome. DQ asked me to do his post, so ...