Griffinkeeper

Sounds good.

I like it, it flows better. "Let go of me!" A high pitched voice said. Alden turned to see Valin clutching a girl by the arm. "What's going on?" Alden ...

Alden is an orphaned gryphon, who is unsure of his origins. He was raised by humans nobles, who made an effort to bring him up as good gryphons are. In ...

This belongs in the poetry department. *Moved to Other Poetry*

Fourth Page Summary: The group gets settled for the night. They have dinner with Hooper's men. Alden goes to fetch Ursa, a gigantic bear (played by Snoink.) The group is ...

Go ahead and join in. You might want to review the rules on Page one of the story thread and the helpful summary thread, which I'll update now.

T'was just a joke. :D

The Imps disappeared from the view of the group. After a few seconds, they heard a loud roar and a shriek. Two of the most terrifying noises ever made. The ...

Poor Imps. *Sniggers* By spirits, do you refer to demons and the like? If so, then I agree with that idea. It could be that these spirits are using the ...

Alden landed at the foot of a great cave. Quietly, he tiptoed into the cave, when he heard a loud snoring. This is the right place all right, Alden thought. ...

The award goes to bubblewrapped! With 7082 points, she managed to win the bi-weekly points competition. The members that made it in the top five were: bubblewrapped: 7082 Myth: 4243 ...

Third Page Summary The introductions finish. The group leaves Valiant. They decide to take a less common road to avoid cheering people. Alden discovers Hooper and some other thieves. He ...

Well, I like it better than this one, but, 1. I don't think Valin would be one to run 2. I don't like the fact that the old ways are ...

I'm moving Alden to pick up Ursa for the story. I think that the thieves should attack within that hour my character is gone. That way, they'll be suspicious of ...

Alden's primary vision is his best. His night vision is simply staring at a section of forest and then looking for movement. Valin has the night vision. Alden would be ...