Griffinkeeper

The wards weren't particularly strong, they're meant to alert you to intruders, not act as walls. Sending 50 is half the force, any more would have to be justified by ...

We're very disturbed. Highly disturbed. I might be scarred for life actually. Again...

The dwarf approached the priest, the dwarf was flanked by two goblins. "The dwarf has challenged you for possession of the tribe." The priest went cold. The goblins were stupid, ...

CL, very impressive. Limyaael is my writing heroine.

Messing with weather is a pretty advanced magic, which would be difficult due to the current state of arcane magic. Commanding trees would be something an elf would be able ...

Snoink and I had a discussion, here's what we're thinking. First, the combat plan as outlined now is completely impractical. To draw out all the goblins, you would need to ...

The Priest sat there quietly. A goblin came up to him. "Is der sometin wrawg?" "Something just destroyed one of my wards. Right here," he said pointing at a spot ...

Alden, Valin, Sirloaz, and Tan'quin rode through the forest at a quick pace. "How far until we reach the wards?" Valin asked. "Not much further, there!" Tan'quin said. Ahead of ...

Your description of Sedgeley will end up in my summary. Very nicely written and described.

Welcome to YWS. Make sure to post critiques before you submit another literary piece. I'm here to help your writing out. This can be a little painful, but it will ...

"I thought we were going to meet at Alten," Alden asked Valin. "They left Alten yesterday, they'll be heading around the mountains. If we pass through Sedgeley we can get ...

That's right. The goose chase goes through the forest, away from the mountains. The main thrust is through the forest into the mountains. The goose chase is the first attack. ...

Fifth Page Summary: The battle ends. Hooper and his men are KIA (Killed In Action.) Seraph and Valin take a map off the head Imp. Hooper and his men are ...

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