Griffinkeeper

Imp, I did ask Snoink about it, but I ended up writing it. I'm glad the Snoinkness of it al came out. Dynamo, it isn't popularity that is putting people ...

Grif entered the tavern. "Hey Grif! What will you have?" "Cream Soda Nate, thanks for asking." "I'm all out." "What about Strawberry Soda?" Nate merely pointed to Snoink, who was ...

*Pokes Dynamo* Kira is a she for future reference.

With the guards dead, Ria now ran for her wagon. They would need to leave the town before more guards showed up, and not many of them seemed to have ...

Name: Britney Spears Age: 26 Build: Small Profession: Pop Singer Background: Having completed her rehab, she is now traveling around the world with common people.

AHH! BLOBS OF TEXT! Please have a line between paragraphs. It makes it easier for us to read. The first chapter isn't very inviting. For one, this random guy is ...

I'm kind of surprised that the lover didn't wake up, nor was he shot. The ending was predictable, but the writing was powerful nonetheless.

Sometimes girls are called Michael, just so you know they are out there. I think you misused the idea of the prologue. A prologue deals with material that is necessary ...

Ugh. I really really don't like the narrator. She is distracting to the reader. Here we are waiting for the story, but she insists on telling us about herself. Big ...

It was difficult to get a general sense of what was going on. Many of the paragraphs have no transitions between them, making it jerky to read, instead of a ...

Obviously the italics don't work...it's got to be my computer! It works whenever I post at school or elsewhere! Ugh! Actually, you disabled BB code in your post. Don't disable ...

I think I'll move this to randomness. *Moved*

Please, if it is appropriate for 16+, rate it R, not PG-13. *Rated R*

I'm going to put Whence up this coming Friday, and following Friday it will all begin again.

Back Aboard the Gryphon , Grif watched as the fighters were loaded onto the Gryphon. "Tact?" Grif asked. "Yes Grif?" the AI said. "Give me the relevant information on these ...