Griffinkeeper

I gave it a spoiler warning.

This may sound like a bad thing, but what the heck. How can you get me interested? Have one of the characters let out a really nasty fart. Then we'll ...

I hope you don't mind if I join in. Name: Seeker Al'ren Race: Gryphon Appearance: Lion sized, with large wingspan. Brown feathers and fur. Specialties/Occupations: Number of odd jobs: postman, ...

Hi The! Welcome to YWS. PM me if you have any questions.

Welcome to YWS, it is the best place on Earth. Which is surprising because our servers are based on Mars.

Don't forget Big Brother. Welcome by the way. PM me if you have any questions. Like, "What is the deal with Pat Buchanan?"

If you have any questions, PM me. Seriously PM me. No, really. I'm bored. No one has asked me for help in years. The PM box is getting old and ...

Another terrible poet! I mean... all our poets here are good... excellent I mean. Just don't take your work to seriously and you'll do fine. PM me if you have ...

In your phone there is a chitter. From that chitter there comes chatter. Mutant turtles are eating my ice cream. Remember the pizza sauce! PM me if you have questions.

There is some pie here! *Grif touches the Pie and a cage snaps down around him.* Hmmm... this could be a problem. Anyways, if you have any questions, PM me.

Welcome Ninja Z! I just critiqued your intro to a story. Consider that a house warming present. Ah what the heck? *tosses confetti.*

For the love of god, DO NOT switch the POV in the middle of stories like that. EVER! To understand why, imagine that reading a story is like driving down ...

Ah yes, the circle of life. I think the story went on for way too long and was way too preachy. This would have been a whole lot better if ...

This is a good piece.

This sounds like something that would be on Cartoon Network. Since it seems oriented at kids, it's hard to critique. I think this would make a better screen play. "More ...