Griffinkeeper

Grif was happy. The group of characters had finally been located. All they had to do was complete a stupid quest and it would all be good. Then Infra ran ...

Please paragraph this, it is just a block of text and very hard on the eyes. This story seems like it gives out way too much information. It would be ...

Consider your argument that the Bible isn't really religious, but fiction. Therefore, the bible would belong in the fiction. Therefore, any book that has commented on the bible is also ...

The Commander of the Third Rangers lay awake in bed after a nightmare. The howling of the wind had kept him up as well as the day's events. General Harris's ...

To answer your question. "Sit. I’m finishing reading over your resumé.” I nearly cringe as I hear her voice; it has hardened so much in the years since I last ...

The title was the most annoying thing. Rouge is a color. Rogue is something else.

"Not exactly. I'm here to keep you safe until you can get home." "What?" "Somewhere in the storybook is a quest object. Once we reach that object, the storybook will ...

"Dragons? Docile creatures?" Grif said skeptically. "Usually," Zephyrus stressed. "What sort of terrible are we talking about here?" Adelaide said, speaking for the first time to the others. "Uh... ar

I wish you had incorporated more about the selection process. How did Sora get to where he was? He could have proven himself on the battlefield, but you could also ...

Please use the other thread for more discussion. *Locked*

Grif had only just barely grasped onto the man, when he was teleported. When he landed, he was dizzy and a wave of nausea came over him. Adelaide countered it ...

I'm sure you'll blow us away. ...Sorry, couldn't resist. Anyways! Welcome Thing Two! I'm sure you will find yourself at home with the weirdness and wackiness that is YWS. Remember: ...

"Get as close as you can," Grif said. "You got to be kidding me," the guy said. Grif said nothing but pulled out his gun. The dragon came closer. "Now!" ...

Grif fell through the water. In seconds the river itself would become encased in ice. At this time he tossed the orb up towards the surface. This orb was a ...

This reminds me of the YWS Storybook: "YWS: The Gathering" If the story stops, all the authors die... I love the imagery you incorporated in this, it kind of made ...