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Re: Sacred
First, spelling errors! Your hair is to red, your teeth are to long! The repetitive nagging of my mother through my mind Your just not human! The second sentence should ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: The Dragon's Rage Chapter 3 part 1
You wrote this in a chat room didn't you? There are too many spelling and grammatical errors to fit. In thirty seconds, let me see what I can do. Ur=Your. ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: 5.6 Earthquake in Northern California
I was in the brand new library at school. It felt really disorienting for about thirty seconds. You could feel the ripples through your seat and the lights were swinging ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: YWS Wars: The Conqueror Invasion
The Gryphon II shuddered as the Hypervelocity cannon fired the heavy slug. In miliseconds, the slug had been shot at an incredible speed straight towards the enemy Cruiser. There was ...
Nov 1, 2007 -
Re: YWS:CI Discussion Thread
Okay, so here is what I was thinking. First, the whole business about the fighters returning to the Highwind while there are still targets about. This was unintentional I'm sure, ...
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: Hello from St. Petersburg
Welcome to the site!
Oct 29, 2007 -
Re: NAACP: Urgent!
Google is your friend.
Oct 28, 2007 -
Re: Adventures of the SPEW Gryphon(Pic Thread)
The sheer speed of awesomeness compelled it to.
Oct 27, 2007 -
Re: YWS Wars: The Conqueror Invasion
If any normal person was asked two hundred million questions at once, it could result in a nervous breakdown. For Adelaide, the task was made easier by setting up a ...
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: How to Write With Style by Kurt Vonnegut
I think most problems with stories occur when writers try to be more sophisticated in their descriptions than they are in real life. So when you see these descriptions, they ...
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: The Greatest Treasure
Alden looked over the stranger carefully. He was old, but he moved gracefully, not with the hobble of a cripple. Alden listened to the conversation and packed up immediately afterward. ...
Oct 26, 2007 -
Re: Is anyone here a humanitarian?
Most people believe that what we do in this world will influence our eternal lives. Even if they don't, most people believe that it is important to help others. Until ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: YWS Wars: The Conqueror Invasion
60 fighters came screaming at the YWS ships. The Gryphon II's defensive turrets detected them and within seconds of detection, the Gryphon fired off several missiles. A moment later, the ...
Oct 25, 2007 -
Re: YWS Wars: The Conqueror Invasion
The Gryphon dropped into the system. "I'm registering four ships, a Command Carrier with two cruisers and a destroyer escort. Targets are 600 kilometers away and are orbiting the remains ...
Oct 22, 2007 -
Re: YWS Wars: The Conqueror Invasion
A beep broke Grif's stare. "The Banhammer just de-cloaked a kilometer off our starboard side. The Banhammer filled the view screen. "How did they get so close without us knowing?" ...
Oct 21, 2007
