Griffinkeeper

I like this. Some parts of it were long winded and could be reduced, but it was well written nonetheless. It reminded me a lot of "1001 Arabian Nights" in ...

Humans are different from other animals. We're not absolutely better than them, many possess innate abilities that allow them to survive in their current environment. Men are not the fastest ...

So let me get this straight... You guys think that just becuase its your body, you have the right to take anothers life. All for your comfort? I don't think ...

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"Jase!" I screamed between splutters, as the thick, pungent smoke slowly smothered my breath, "Where are-." This isn't exactly a flying start. Make your sentences shorter when your characters are ...

How about this: We kill animals to eat; only we benefit with food. We kill embryos for our convenience. What if someone decided to kill you because it was convenient? ...

Let's get back on topic. The question is this: is it right for an atheist to celebrate a Christian holiday and partake in the festivities therein? I say yes. Just ...

Ah, another weekend incommunicado. I probably had it coming...

Holy cow, I forgot I even started those. Blast from the past. The storybook section of TYWC was really where I got interested in writing as a hobby.

The computer is very small and the room is sparsely equipped. The person isn't all that bad (although I always get a little disoriented with cat people; they give me ...

I love this "painting with light." It's very clever. I encourage you to play around with it some more.

Want something critiqued by a semi-amateur professional? Just post a link of your story below. Note: I only critique stories, poetry is my weak point.

Excellent work. I'd run a spellcheck just to be sure. I think that, after being burned alive, there would be nothing left to rot, all that would be left would ...

The letter doesn't feel authentic. At all. Soldiers that write back to their moms don't want to worry their mothers. Usually they'll ask how things are on the home front. ...

I woke up in a cold sweat with a gasp. You're trying to describe way too much. I think you should seperate this into two sentences. First one describes her ...