Griffinkeeper

So, we need a plot. We have characters, now how are they going to meet?

Name: Jeremy Stork Age: 23 Gender: Male Race: Human Appearance: Jeremy is tall and lanky. His skin is pale, a side effect of spending too much time in libraries and ...

I'd like everyone to read this little piece on character flaws. It is very good advice concerning character profiles and entertaining to read as well. Some profiles are missing the ...

I'm thinking this will be of the fantasy genre.

I'll be honest, I only read the first paragraph. The sun was dipping low into the sky, barely a sliver visible. It threw deep oranges, bright reds into the sky, ...

Several things strike me as being odd about this. For one, it is set in the future, yet things seem written for a person in the past. When people write ...

I think the perspective is off. You're writing it as if the main character is reflecting back on what happened to him. I dislike it, since it implies that the ...

I like the flower pictures the best. They seem so fragile and so alien at the same time. It was well focused. The tree bark picture wasn't as impressive, the ...

A diary based story, minus the personal experiences, characters, and stories one would expect. Throw into this an author obsessed with vampires and you have... this. Seriously, this story needs ...

This chapter is weighed down in detail. If you have to split your chapter up into sections, then that is an indication that it is too long and boring. Chapters ...

We'll worry about the plot later. Please post character profiles. Include basic information about their appearance and what it is that they are searching for. Also include character strengths and ...

Apparently I need to do more writing for storybooks.

I've done some work in the YWS History section.

This poem tries to accomplish... something. I'm not sure what, which means you really lost track of it.

So, what we were trying to do here was to create this really heart breaking scene, following the departure of a father. Unfortunately, you didn't manage to achieve it. None ...