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  • Short Story » General, General Re: of portraits and men and silliness

    This was well written. The dialog was great, as Brian said. Only thing I'd suggest is try and form a plot, perhaps, and keep going.

    Jan 28, 2005


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings