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Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy! PS: ...

Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy!

Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy!

Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy!

Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy!

Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy!

Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy!

Hi! I'm grenade Catcher :) Will you review my fantasy story? It's kinda creepyish. It's called the Haunting Hour (Or isabelle's Story, I'm not sure yet.) Hope you enjoy!

Hi I'm Grenade Catcher! This has a lot of potential, but I think you need to slow it down a bit. You jump from one point to another without any ...

Thanks! I'll go through and expand some more, she did end her life and ended up in heaven. I can put a story in about how she commited suicide to ...

Alice gazed at the stars that surrounded her. They were pinpricks of light, of hope, among the deep engulfing dark. Her breaths came easily, despite the lack of oxygen around ...

Woahhhhh this is REALLY long. I wouldd consider moving this to the novel section and making each chapter its own thread! I can't read and review all this!!!! With the ...

Hey Bro! I'm going to review this peice. Woke up in this here bed and faced a chainsaw mounted shotgun sitting 6 feet from me in my grandma's favorite chair. ...

Ohhh I never thought of that! Thank you!

Hey, I dont have time to critique, but judging by the title, it seems like your making more. Is it a novel? Ask one of the people running around with ...