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Re: Living in a Box
Trying to figure out if I want to continue or not, might have to move it to novels:) “Emily,” a soft voice called. It was melodic, like a sweet lullaby. ...
Sep 26, 2011 -
Re: Jesters (chapter 1)
Hmm... I only read the first paragraph, then I had to stop. Have you ever heard of the Maximum Ride series? There's Angel, a six year old with blue eyes ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Star Crossed: Chapter One
Hey! Happy to be your first reviewer:) I really like to rip EVERYTHING apart, and I've got a lot of time. I'm going to be VERY, VERY nit-picky. Sorry if ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: Jungle Warriors
Hahahaha:) Classy pretty much covered everything! That was very entertaining though, thank you!
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Matts Different Life
Hi there! I'm going to review this for you:) Grammar, punctuation, paragraphing, etc.: It all started at the age of 15, we entered Australia after we left our war- torn ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: A Story About a Postman in a Storeroom Eating Pistachios
Hahahaha! This was hilarious!!!!! I think you have a really good chance of winning the contest... I didn't see any errors! Is it under a thousand words? It seems a ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: Lilies
Hey! So I'm here to review this, like you asked! You had some problems with italics, I think. There are some paragraphs that are italicized and I'm not sure if ...
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Will review (Almost) ANYTHING!
I'll do that right away! Thank you!!
May 26, 2011 -
Re: Letters of Life and Death~ Prologue
Oh that's awesome! Thanks for the ideas:) I copy from my word document, so the italics go away and I just go through and re-highlight them.
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Letters of Life and Death~ Prologue
Hi! Thanks, I think I'm going to make it something more unrealistic, kind of like a disease that can spread from person to person. It will give it a more ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Letters of Life and Death~ Prologue
As the moonlight shone down on Katherine, she looked at what she had done. I can’t stay here. I can’t stay here. I can’t stay here. Her thoughts were a ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: How to; Beach addition ;D
This is awesome! I think that I'm so drawing disadvantaged, even this awesomely amazing tutorial couldn't help my helplessness.
May 24, 2011 -
Re: The Thirst
Hi! I'm going to review this, obviously! Where am ? Kat thought to herself. Well it's dark and cramped and my leg seems to be attached to something. A chain, ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Poison (Writer's Roulette Entry)
Wow, I'm not sure what the writers Roulette is, but this probably has a really good chance of winning! You have great details, not too much so that we know ...
May 24, 2011 -
Re: Will review (Almost) ANYTHING!
What I will review: Anything but... What I wont review: Poems (I'm not very educated in the way of poems) What I don't like to review, but will: Historical pieces ...
May 24, 2011
