GreenFinchLinnetBird

Hello Amfliflier! This was an interesting piece, and I very much liked the bluntness of it. I was just a little confused about this part here: Acting on one thing ...

Hey theotherone! I just wanted to start out by saying that I enjoyed reading this. The grammar was good, for the most part, although I agree with the comments that ...

Hello FRAYEDjade! First of all, I love your verbs. Water droplets peppered, and midmorning glinted, and her fingers rejoiced, for example. Verbs like that are descriptive and fun to read. ...

Hello the doctor! Well this was quite an interesting script. I have a few questions though. First of all, I'm not sure where the two men you mention in the ...

Hello Syntheticman! I'd first like to commend you on your excellent grammar, which made your piece quite nice to read. On top of that, everything had a very good flow; ...