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Re: Breaking my own Heart
Hello Amfliflier! This was an interesting piece, and I very much liked the bluntness of it. I was just a little confused about this part here: Acting on one thing ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Sunday
Hey theotherone! I just wanted to start out by saying that I enjoyed reading this. The grammar was good, for the most part, although I agree with the comments that ...
Mar 21, 2011 -
Re: Red, White, Blue, Brown.
Hello FRAYEDjade! First of all, I love your verbs. Water droplets peppered, and midmorning glinted, and her fingers rejoiced, for example. Verbs like that are descriptive and fun to read. ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Camilo The Magician
Hello the doctor! Well this was quite an interesting script. I have a few questions though. First of all, I'm not sure where the two men you mention in the ...
Mar 20, 2011 -
Re: Running
Hello Syntheticman! I'd first like to commend you on your excellent grammar, which made your piece quite nice to read. On top of that, everything had a very good flow; ...
Mar 20, 2011