GreenEyes

Hey thanks for the support, though to be honest it's the fact that I suffer from depression, and they aren't helping is more the point, not that them not being ...

This is really nice, but please remember to put the capitals in!

I like the sentiment in this poem, I've only got one criticism; Which is which? How many? How bright? I'm not sure the phrase how bright is entirely relevant, because ...

Ok, this is maybe slightly similar to some of my other work, but that's because I mainly write when I'm going through things and writing helps me through it. Here ...

OK, I honestly LOVE this poem! I can really relate to the idea behind it! I've only got one criticism which is I think you use the word 'child' too ...

I think this is a really nice little poem :) I've only got one point really; We're missing kindness, you used to give us. Not completely sure what this line ...

This is really good, not much to say apart from this little bit; My friends go and stab my back, I'm not sure about this line, the rest of the ...

People say you have to look a certain way T o fit in, t he only problem with that is, I never asked for your opinion :) I've not really ...

My mask is slipping, The cracks are showing. This screen that I made, Is starting to fall down I’ve covered my feelings, For so many years I’ve bottled them up, ...

h Walking to Tec seemed longer today, was it because I was thinking of him? His liquid purple and blue eyes, his shaggy fair hair, just thinking of him gave ...

OK, this is something I wrote absolutely ages ago, but I was just wondering what other people thought of it. I've written better stuff since then I need to put ...

Name: Artemis Age: 15 Appearance: Eye Colour- Green Hair Colour- Red Height and build- Tall and thin Skin tone- pale with freckles Clothing: Black tight jeans, a loose green shirt ...

This is a really touching piece of writing. It's obviously very personal and I understand that it must be hard to write about something like that. It is an almost ...

Hi Matt, I think this is really good. The lack of structure is effective but I think that it could use a tiny bit more form, but that is just ...

Thanks, that review helped alot, I didn't quite realise how much I had been reeating!!! A little note is that I dug this up from ages ago, before I had ...