GreenEyes

This is amazing, I really wish I could have written something like this, obviously this isn't really a review i'm writing here, but i just wanted to say how much ...

Thanks guys! :D And yeah, I missed a word out there it seems... thanks AngelMarie, it should be; But instead you took those things that I said Or something like ...

This isn't the best work I've done, it's kind of sloppy to be honest, but I'd like feedback on it anyway :) That’s it for me now, I’ve given up ...

I really like this poem, and I just have a few wee things to say! Firstly; It’s cold outside , a frigid night. I can be a bit of a ...

It will turn into a romance :) I have just always had trouble writing good intros, so I was hoping for some tips on that :P

Thanks for the review, but please don't say that the poem is 'cliche'. This is stuff that I have actually gone through, and writing was a way out, so please ...

I know I've not broken it up into stanzas, but that was deliberate. And I've rambled on a bit... I look with disinterest at the dripping blood, It dribbles slowly ...

Hey, this is a really good piece of writing, and I've just got a few things to point out, but on whole I really liked it! It was the most ...

I really, really like this poem! You've got a great style that I think is really unique! I really son't have much to say about this, you've got great grammar, ...

First of all, I really like this, took me a while to read, which is probably why it's got so few reviews. Secondly; The short sentances can help get the ...

Just typos? Would you mind pointing them out in case I miss them?

This is a story that I've started writing, and I was just hoping for some feedback on it, to see how it was going and if it grasped people's attention. ...

I really love this piece and I've got a few pieces of criticism! Firstly; please remember to capitalise the beginnings of lines! It makes the thing on whole easier to ...

This is a really good introduction to a story, it's obviously short, so a wee bit harder to review, but I'll do my best! First of all I think that ...

Can I get some more feedback please?