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Thanks a lot for your review. :)

Thanks so much for your review and advice. :)

Thank you so much for your review, and I'll make sure to let you know when I post chapter 2. :)

It was really great. I liked it a lot.

This is probably the best story I have read so far. I loved the concept of it because I have never heard of a story like this. I like how ...

I really liked the story, but I do have to comment that it may be a little short for the first chapter. I would probably suggest you add a little ...