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  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: Monday night

    You painted a nice picture in the first two stanzas of the poem. I like the way you ended it by asking if you ruined the poem, I got a ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Realistic Re: chiaroscuro

    This poem was very well written. I especially liked how the word "dropped" was isolated for more intensity to the poem. When I write poetry, I typically don't use capital ...

    Oct 22, 2015


You are going to love some of your characters because they are you, or some facet of you, and you are going to hate some characters for the same reason.
— Anne Lamott