Gravity

"My boyfriend's name is Jacques. Even though he's gay, he hates his pretentious name. So everyone calls him Jack. We are similar in that way. My mother is french, and ...

I totally see your point. I was actually unsure about going into detail about the paragraph or not. I'm glad you love the story. So basically, it's habit for John ...

crap!!! I'm sorry. I didn't hit publish. My computer was being stupid, I swear!

Yeah, I agreed I needed to develop the characters of the Aunt and Uncles, and Caterina's relationship to them. However, it says very clearly in the story that the plot ...

There are almost no words. The ending, switching POV... confusing but funny. And the punctuation and grammar was bad. Definitely the best, worst story I will ever read. I can't ...

Thanks. I am VERY comma happy. One of my issues as a newbie author is trying to eliminate those commas. I'm really glad you liked the story. I agree with ...