Gratziella13

the explanation was for the future, when she joined that club she was 4 at the time, cheers.

Thank you, your review really helped out

I really like this, it brings yourself into the poem as if you are really there and I love that type of involvement in stories and poems so well done! ...

Wow, that is good stuff. So emotional yet so effortless, almost. I think you should write a bit more, extend it a bit, but I don't think that particularly matters ...