Gratziella13

Very good, very touching, very emotional. This is a good piece and you should be proud of that, but the art when the character starts to panic all comes too ...

Good, but needs more details. What's really happening in this poem? Is she staring at a rainbow with her mates? Is she embracing her last gusts of life? Good imagery, ...

It's alright, but like others have said, it does sound like a Disney TV show and unfortunately I hate Disney :/ If you want to make the context more grown ...

This script is very funny. I can imagine it on a TV Show with laughs in the backround and everything. I was laughing at the Proposal episode with what that ...

Amazing. I love the introduction of the characters and how you build that up into an amazing piece of writing. At the beginning though when they were speaking I got ...