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  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: don't be consumed

    I love this! I really love it! First off, I love your sentences and structure, especially how you weaved your words to form an interesting image. One of my favourite ...

    Mar 1, 2018

  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General
    Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.1

    Hey, can I just say that this is great? I jumped in to this blindly and I'm loving it. I really hope you update soon. The concept you have is ...

    Jun 8, 2016

  • Article / Essay » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: Childhood Memories: The Curse of Poverty

    Kudos! This was a very interesting piece. I'm happy to have read it, and to have gained some knowledge about India. I don't normally encounter pieces like this, and I'm ...

    Jun 6, 2016


  • Hey, Doormandan! Nice piece, and interesting concept. The title is very eye-catching, and I like how you start the poem. I like your rhymes, they're very clever. I always have ...

    Jun 6, 2016

  • Short Story » Fanfiction, Other
    Re: Young Justice: Beast Boy's Christmas Part One.

    Give me all the DC feels, why don't you? Lord, I'm always such a sucker for DC fanfiction, and this did not disappoint. :D Some thoughts on your piece: the ...

    Sep 28, 2015

  • Poetry » Spiritual, General
    Re: Chaos In The Mind

    YES, HELLO, THIS POEM IS FANTASTIC. Your poems are so good. I love reading them. I can't find anything wrong with your work so I expect this review to be ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: I Know A Place

    Wow, I love this poem. I love it and how it flows so perfectly. Your rhythm is pretty smooth, the progress is consistent. I love the title and how you ...

    Nov 29, 2014

  • Poetry » Romantic, General
    Re: In This Moment.

    Hello! I'm here to write a review for this fantastic piece! I really like your title and how romantic this is. However your rhythm seems a little off beat, I ...

    Nov 28, 2014

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Romantic
    Re: Foxglove: Chapter One

    Hey, I like your story! So first, this really isn't going to be much of a review seeing as this was pretty well written! I really like your character's name, ...

    Sep 29, 2014

  • Other » Other, General
    Re: A Tale of Going North

    Hey, good job on this poem! I don't really find any error in your poem, but then again I'm not good with poetry either. Although, I suggest you break it ...

    Sep 27, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: v

    Hello, welcome to YWS! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem! For some reason it kind of felt dystopian and reminded me of the Hunger Games and Divergent. I loved it. ...

    Sep 27, 2014

  • Other » Dramatic, Literature
    Re: The Midnight Piano

    Hello, and welcome to YWS! I'm here to review your work! First thing I noticed is the title; For me titles are very important, they add extra flavor to your ...

    Sep 27, 2014

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Realistic
    Re: Mislead To Misery

    Hi, I'm here to review your work! Well, I must be honest with you, I didn't realize that these were lyrics, not a poem. It's pretty good, and the flow ...

    Sep 27, 2014

  • Poetry » Literature, Lyrical
    Re: Homecoming

    Hi! So I'm guessing you're from the Philippines, as well? Well anyway, this poem was really well written, and I love the rhythm and rhyme! As I was reading, I ...

    May 14, 2014

  • Poetry » General, General
    Re: I think you forgot..

    Hello, GrapeNerd here! So this is a really great piece, and it does have a lot of impact on the reader. What I first noticed is that the lines are ...

    May 14, 2014


Poetry is a phantom script telling how rainbows are made and why they go away.
— Carl Sandburg