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Re: don't be consumed
I love this! I really love it! First off, I love your sentences and structure, especially how you weaved your words to form an interesting image. One of my favourite ...
Mar 1, 2018 -
Re: When Atlas Fell // 1.1
Hey, can I just say that this is great? I jumped in to this blindly and I'm loving it. I really hope you update soon. The concept you have is ...
Jun 8, 2016 -
Re: Childhood Memories: The Curse of Poverty
Kudos! This was a very interesting piece. I'm happy to have read it, and to have gained some knowledge about India. I don't normally encounter pieces like this, and I'm ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Quod Statera De Coelum Et Infernum (The Balance of Heaven and Hell in Latin)
Hey, Doormandan! Nice piece, and interesting concept. The title is very eye-catching, and I like how you start the poem. I like your rhymes, they're very clever. I always have ...
Jun 6, 2016 -
Re: Young Justice: Beast Boy's Christmas Part One.
Give me all the DC feels, why don't you? Lord, I'm always such a sucker for DC fanfiction, and this did not disappoint. :D Some thoughts on your piece: the ...
Sep 28, 2015 -
Re: Chaos In The Mind
YES, HELLO, THIS POEM IS FANTASTIC. Your poems are so good. I love reading them. I can't find anything wrong with your work so I expect this review to be ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: I Know A Place
Wow, I love this poem. I love it and how it flows so perfectly. Your rhythm is pretty smooth, the progress is consistent. I love the title and how you ...
Nov 29, 2014 -
Re: In This Moment.
Hello! I'm here to write a review for this fantastic piece! I really like your title and how romantic this is. However your rhythm seems a little off beat, I ...
Nov 28, 2014 -
Re: Foxglove: Chapter One
Hey, I like your story! So first, this really isn't going to be much of a review seeing as this was pretty well written! I really like your character's name, ...
Sep 29, 2014 -
Re: A Tale of Going North
Hey, good job on this poem! I don't really find any error in your poem, but then again I'm not good with poetry either. Although, I suggest you break it ...
Sep 28, 2014 -
Re: v
Hello, welcome to YWS! I thoroughly enjoyed reading your poem! For some reason it kind of felt dystopian and reminded me of the Hunger Games and Divergent. I loved it. ...
Sep 27, 2014 -
Re: The Midnight Piano
Hello, and welcome to YWS! I'm here to review your work! First thing I noticed is the title; For me titles are very important, they add extra flavor to your ...
Sep 27, 2014 -
Re: Mislead To Misery
Hi, I'm here to review your work! Well, I must be honest with you, I didn't realize that these were lyrics, not a poem. It's pretty good, and the flow ...
Sep 27, 2014 -
Re: Homecoming
Hi! So I'm guessing you're from the Philippines, as well? Well anyway, this poem was really well written, and I love the rhythm and rhyme! As I was reading, I ...
May 14, 2014 -
Re: I think you forgot..
Hello, GrapeNerd here! So this is a really great piece, and it does have a lot of impact on the reader. What I first noticed is that the lines are ...
May 14, 2014
