-
Re: The Survivor
Brilliant. Just brilliant I love it. Very descriptive and adventuresome I could actually see what was happening as I read it and that doesn't happen often! I like how you ...
Aug 28, 2008 -
Re: Cliché love
A very dramatic poem! But ya really hit the emotions in this poem it's great!
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: for the birds who went south last winter
Hi I really liked your poem I thought it was really inspiring I thought in some more commas in different places but I really liked it!
Aug 17, 2008 -
Re: The House of the World
The world is a house with many windows; each one looks out at a scene you've never seen before. Is it not a very beautiful thing? To see all the ...
Aug 16, 2008 -
Re: Enough
enough, never we have enough, shouting in the swine's face enough, rings through the halls of gluttons enough, dies with the peasants who don't have any.
Aug 16, 2008
