Grandison

I changed the title to Resisting Rhys and now would like more feedback, the entire story has been posted online on two other sites, I would like some feedback on ...

Ok, I changed the beginning, I need to know if it still needs work

Thanks so much, fixed!

So I edited it a bit, as I'm learning some more grammar rules, no no, this isn't really cliche at all, at least not to me seeing how I know ...

You both are saying that I just posted it w/o editing it, and I'm not seeing how. Where are the problems? And boring? Hmm, I'm not seeing that here, but ...

Ok, I recently made some changes to the second to last paragraph by adding some examples of their deeds. I hope it isn't all a mouth full. Let me know ...

Hmm, I honestly don't get the point of what you said. I read your first review, and if I felt like changing anything, I would've. I like when people give ...

Thanks for the review! But no, this isn't a poor girl/rich boy story. Tatum isn't poor, she just can't really afford the tuition for the school. Selene isn't a TA, ...

Thanks for reading and I did place a comment on your Wattpad profile a while Grandison

@Lava I keep getting the whole 'flirting thing is weird,' don't worry that's not a major part of the story, it's not like they're trying to date one another or ...

Awe I'm your first review thanx =) and yea this story is pretty out there with the ruthlessness of my two MCs. As far as the flirting goes....haha, I keep ...

Awe, thanks for the review Formslipper! I recently came to love Evan myself. I'm writing chapter 26 as we speak, and I'm falling more for his character each section. I ...

As far as criticism goes, I felt like the whole thing was a good build up to what was to come in chapter one. We get to meet Jonah and ...

Thank you for your review. I hope the "peculiar white maid" didn't offend anyone, I was just saying that Alice was strange. Perhaps I should leave out the "white" part? ...