Grandison

Overall I liked it, it's a pretty good set up. I just wish I knew more about the MC, you didn't really give us a general description of the person, ...

Yay chapter 2! There were a few mistakes, clack instead of clock, I think. And also, I feel as though dad should be capitalized when in first person, unless you're ...

Let me just reiterate that you’ve got an amazing vocabulary. Your stats says you’re fifteen, and if that’s true, your use of words is far greater than mine. There were ...

I find this to be a very interesting read. For one, it reads like a real novel, so good job there. And two, it's so strong in the way that ...