Grandison

Awe, thanks for the review Formslipper! I recently came to love Evan myself. I'm writing chapter 26 as we speak, and I'm falling more for his character each section. I ...

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Let me just reiterate that you’ve got an amazing vocabulary. Your stats says you’re fifteen, and if that’s true, your use of words is far greater than mine. There were ...

As far as criticism goes, I felt like the whole thing was a good build up to what was to come in chapter one. We get to meet Jonah and ...

Thank you for your review. I hope the "peculiar white maid" didn't offend anyone, I was just saying that Alice was strange. Perhaps I should leave out the "white" part? ...

I find this to be a very interesting read. For one, it reads like a real novel, so good job there. And two, it's so strong in the way that ...

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