Grandison

It's dark and twisted! I like it. You can tell the MC truly has no emotional attachment to those who just perished as he's enjoying or stoically watching their demise. ...

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You both are saying that I just posted it w/o editing it, and I'm not seeing how. Where are the problems? And boring? Hmm, I'm not seeing that here, but ...

This isn't long but it says a lot! When I read the title I expected a twist with love, but I like what you did by making it how nature ...

Hmm, I like it as a free-style, but I'm not seeing how the ending gives off that she was raped. Also, it should be 'prey' instead of 'pray.' But this ...

Ok, I recently made some changes to the second to last paragraph by adding some examples of their deeds. I hope it isn't all a mouth full. Let me know ...

Hmm, I honestly don't get the point of what you said. I read your first review, and if I felt like changing anything, I would've. I like when people give ...

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Oh wow, this is nice! I've always wanted to draw and unfortunately, never obtained the talent for it. Well at first I thought it was Robert Pattinson, forgive me, and ...

Spotted a few mistakes, titles of television shows should be in italics, so it's The Fresh Prince of Bel Air, not "The Fresh Prince of Bel Air." Song titles, however, ...

The first paragraph has some errors, for instance : "Dylan's parents died when the day he turned nineteen." "He was living an immature life that lead him into the most ...

Thanks for the review! But no, this isn't a poor girl/rich boy story. Tatum isn't poor, she just can't really afford the tuition for the school. Selene isn't a TA, ...

Thanks for reading and I did place a comment on your Wattpad profile a while Grandison

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This is interesting how you just jumped straight into the action like you did. I couldn't exactly find any mistakes to correct you on, so I'm not going to go ...