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Re: Reassurance
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Aug 12, 2011 -
Re: It's Here!
It's been thirteen tedious days. But now, it's my time. It's today. *TODAY. Five letters. A million different emotions. One meaning. I can be myself for the next month. I ...
Jun 20, 2011 -
Re: I Wish I Could Tell Myself
I wish I could tell myself that he won't be there for me. I wish I could tell myself that he just doesn't care. I wish I could slap myself ...
Jun 12, 2011 -
Re: 13 Days.
I wonder if there's a beautiful place out there. A place where you're not based on gender, appearance, wealth, race, job, sexuality, religion, or education. Where you're purely accepted for ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: I'm Giving You Up.
"Give up." Just two little words that mean so much. Grown ups used to tell us never to give up. If we lost, coaches told they were happy that at ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Praying for a New Start
Tell me how you feel, Tell me if what we had was ever real. Because now, you're not what you were. Everything we used to have is just a blur. ...
May 30, 2011 -
Re: It Must Have Been a Sign
This week has been too complicated. Hearing "6742" down the halls ruined my self esteem. Now I can't handle the pain; my shoulders are weighted. And everyone ruined my chance, ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: So happily
I thought this was a beautiful way to express your feelings. I think I understand your emotions and what you're going through; I'm going through something very similar. My favorite ...
May 21, 2011 -
Re: Rejection
"You'll never know how much time I've spent cryin' over you in the bathroom Thinkin', 'What should I do?' 'Cuz why should I tell you how I feel If you ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: An Army of One.
These girls have always been my weakness. Not one ever saw my distress. But I had to face them, day after day, Wishing my loneliness would just stay away. The ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: As Much As I Love You?
Wow. I really, really enjoyed this poem. The rhymes were clever and fitting, and the words perfectly exemplified your feelings (at least, I think they did). This poem really touched ...
Apr 30, 2011 -
Re: Alternative Ending to "The Lady or the Tiger?"
In my reading class, we were assigned to read the short story, "The Lady or the Tiger?" by Frank Stockton. The story finishes with a cliff hanger, and our teacher ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Life's Decisions and Destiny
I liked your take on the definition of "destiny." It's a very broad word, and you brought up some good points to properly argue your side. For the most part, ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Never Give Up On Love (Rainy Day)
Very sweet. I liked the feel of it. I have one grammar-related question... in the first verse, you say: "School days that seem to come and go But I’ll never ...
Apr 19, 2011 -
Re: Happiness Found in the Cha-Cha
The bell has rung, and our sneakers squeak. We're dancing in gym, so we all appear meek. None of us know, yet, who we will choose It might be a ...
Apr 12, 2011
