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Loved it even if the end was a bit too soppy for my liking In places it was a bit confusing, like the first paragraph, maybe liberate some more about ...

I like your story, its really interesting and grabs for attention At first I was worried because I wouldn't want to read something creepy! but then, in the next paragraph ...

Cool lyrics, very catchy I like it, its interesting, though some bits are a bit iffy The lines repeated ' rise for this' 3 times at the end maybe cut ...

Ellow, this is a random story I wrote for a friend so yeah... Any who see her tonight will think they are seeing a shadow cast by the moon. She ...

It seems like a interesting story, though confusing at times. Fancy words are good every now and again but not in every sentence as it confuses the meaning of it ...

It was short but I liked it because it had a sense of mystery and darkness and I like that sorta thing.

Falling through floors I woke up, startled, to hear music blasting from my radio. I turned it off as I looked at the time. It was midnight and completely silent ...