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Re: non-exsistent
Although I don't actually know you, your perfect in my dreams. Although I've never really met you, I've had dreams aplenty. I don't know the colour of your eyes, but ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: A Vacation is No Excuse
Holy heart failure batman this is amazing photography :P Well even though I lost the window seat to the inspiration the first four are my favorite. I especially like the ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: The Mask
That was very nice. As many people have said, I think most people can relate to trying to fit in so much that they lose the true purpose in life, ...
Aug 7, 2009 -
Re: A journey of a dreamer
Let me start with I like the ambition of the narrator. I can tell he is driven to this goal. This part was descriptive, but I didn't like it because ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: Secondhand lies
Just in case you're wondering no I haven't been dumped. It was about 2:30 am and I couldn't sleep. I hope you like this :) Secondhand lies verse 1 I ...
Jul 17, 2009 -
Re: La fleur violette
Nice, I like the first picture best. The angel is much better. The flowers have bloomed and you really captured the beginning of summer in these pictures. The colours are ...
Jun 24, 2009 -
Re: Fathers Day
I love him but I forgot to get him a gift :oops:. So, because he loves the fact that I'm writing I thought I'd post something for him. No need ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Cool images!
Wow, I really wasn't expecting that. I thought it would be a bunch or flowers or something, but your photography skills are amazing. I liked all the pictures going up ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: Love...or Torcher?
I like this poem, it was powerful. My favorite line was the last one, But is this love or a lighted torch? I truly believe that in society people can't ...
Jun 20, 2009 -
Re: The camera on the bus goes snap, snap, snap...
Much better then brianne's will ever be. Like the necklace one most.
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Always better
This was written about a girl in my class that always has to one-up me, and she knows it. As I stand on a platform, I still look up at ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Why love?
I like this, it happens to girls all the time. I hope your friend gets over him. As for the lyrics I think I found a few errors Every night ...
Jun 18, 2009 -
Re: Humourous Poems
Well hello there fellow new-be, (it's Ryley). I liked these poems. They were cute, I even chuckled a little. When did you write these? I liked how you displayed different ...
Jun 15, 2009 -
Re: No Match
I really liked this piece. How the tables Will turn It's so true how in life so quickly things can change and that was expressed in that line. Not only ...
Jun 13, 2009 -
Re: One big, not-so-happy family.
Wow, I see a lot of depth in this. I can tell the mix of feelings, a little disgust and hate in this poem. The topic you were writing about ...
Jun 13, 2009
