Goldie_Locks

Well. Cute. All I can say ^^ You can't really review Haikus! ~Sarah

I agree with them, the syllables are a little messed up, but your message is clear. It's broken a little strangely, but it adds a twist! Keep up the work, ...

I like! It's simple, yet cunning. It's short, yet it seems to stretch out forever. It's a nice one...not new, but nice! Keep it up! ~Sarah

I agree with Esther and Snoink, it could use a little spicing up. It's nothing special, nothing new. But it was...er...pleasant. It was a fresh read. I think it could ...

Heya, Lumi! I didn't find anything other than what they said to be out of place. However, the last stanza is rather irrelevant and the poem would be much better ...

Well. I liked it, but as Vernon said, nothing special or new. It was impressive, though. I liked your flow, which was brilliant, and the massages in it. keep it ...

Wow. So descriptive, and it describes perfectly what we think dogs feel. I love the Personification, and at first I thought it was a child, but the tail-wagging tipped me ...

I agree, this is a rather scrambled, hard-to-read, and most of all different poem. It looks more like an essay than a poem, which hampers the way a reader looks ...

An undershirt and teletubby underwear :3

hey guys! Something I wrote just now, and I hope you like it! Why should you be the one to leave! Why could it not be me? Why did you ...

Well, hi! I'm Goldie. But, please, call me Sarah. I'm uh, RED's little sister. I'm fairly new but, I haven't done this yet so I figured I would. I'm 10 ...

Ok well. I understand where you are coming from but really, i don't think the others are CRITISIZING, they're just trying to help you out and liike, point out what ...