GoldenSkies

Hi Isha! I'm looking for another opinion on the first chapter of my story. So if you could review it, that'd be great! topic68930.html Here's some food: This is making ...

Hey WritingWords, Could you review the first chapter of my novel, topic68930.html ? Thanks so much! GoldenSkies

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Hi, funkyreg101, Golden here to review! :) She stopped at the bed, cutting my view off. Honestly, I have no idea what he had a view off in the first ...

Oh, trust me, you were not harsh. I knew this had a ton of bad things about it, since it's been pretty much forever since I've wrote something. Thanks so ...

This is the first thing I've written in a long, long time (a few years, yikes). I'm kinda rusty... You can probably tell. I guess that isn't the thing to ...

I like this, but I agree with pretty much everybody else... There needs to be more detail on what they are doing, because that's what confused me. It needs a ...

Hi, imaginemymind, this is my first review... so forgive me because I'm not too good at it yet. Her laugh had carved a smile on my face. It was like ...

Shepherd - That sounds like a really awesome job to have! Thanks! Pink - I read mostly fantasy/sci-fi/dystopian stuff, but I love all genres! I write fantasy-ish stuff. :) My ...

Hi, my name is Julie. You can call me Julie, GoldenSkies, Golden, Skies, Popcorn... you know, whatever floats your boat. I'm 16, going to be a junior in high school. ...