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  • Other Poetry Re: My Dear Person

    Hi there. You are my hero. No, really. I've been seeing so many religious poems circling YWS. Not just about Christianity, but about Atheistim and Agnosticism (which I kind of ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Hypocrite

    Hypocrites have ugly teeth With lies well strewn in all they reap And backs bent with tempers flaring Hearts unworthy, thoughts are daring Hypocrites have spiny hair That cracks and ...

    May 5, 2011
  • Other Poetry Re: Only You

    Hay dear! Sorry it took so long for my review, I deeply apologize. Though I have only slight practice in the poetry world, there are a few things that can ...

    May 4, 2011
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Bair's Choice [rated 12+ for language]

    I call it a short story, but... Anyway. This story has been rated 12+ for language. Please read at your own discretion. I wrote this a few months ago, then ...

    Mar 11, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Simply Free

    I like myself better When the lights are all off When the mirror is shattered Tucked away in some box When all of my thoughts Are written down on a ...

    Feb 11, 2011
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: Miz Madison

    Great job! Only a few complaints. :} She was Mister Madison's wife, he'd jus' buy her more. Mr. Washington? My frein' told me how she overheard the boss talkin' to ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Romeo and Juliet: A Poem

    Hay! Great job! The only thing I'd work on is your transition from Romeo to Juliet. If it wasn't meant to be a transition, then I'm sorry, but Romeo killed ...

    Jan 26, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Maybe

    If you could see my face Every second of every day I bet it would change your attitude I bet it’d change what you say If you could see who ...

    Jan 25, 2011
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Mortuus Fatum

    Hallo buddy! Glad to see you writing again! This time there were only a few grammar mistakes, so let's address them. Why I'm being so pulled to it? Why am ...

    Dec 28, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: All Hath (Rated 12+ for intenseness)

    Uh.... I don't write poetry. At all. EVER. I don't even know if it belongs in this category. But... here's what I tampered out this evening. And, it's supposed to ...

    Dec 10, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Adam's Suicide Note

    Rated 12+ for language and mention of death. Quick Info~ I randomly became intrigued with the idea of writing a suicide note. I liked this one, but I might write ...

    Dec 1, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Frecar - Chapter 1: The Mysterious Old Man

    Back to help with the new editing. And though I'm only a 15 year old boy, my name is known by all, and my wealth compares to no one else's. ...

    Nov 25, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Limitless: Chapter Eight (Part 2 of 2)

    Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Missed Part 1 ? Anna took a moment to reminisce on her early childhood. It was so perfect, it seemed. Robert was an amazing ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Limitless: Chapter Eight (Part 1 of 2)

    Rated 21+ for fantasy and violence. When Anna woke up, she was surprised. She sat up a dizzingly rate, staring around in her frantic confusion. She thought for a few ...

    Nov 24, 2010
  • Media Reviews Re: The Inkheart Series

    I thought that Inkheart was a really cool and original idea! I haven't read Inkdeath yet, but I'll get around to it I'm sure! Is it good? XD YES. I ...

    Nov 24, 2010


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