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Re: My Dear Person
Hi there. You are my hero. No, really. I've been seeing so many religious poems circling YWS. Not just about Christianity, but about Atheistim and Agnosticism (which I kind of ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Hypocrite
Hypocrites have ugly teeth With lies well strewn in all they reap And backs bent with tempers flaring Hearts unworthy, thoughts are daring Hypocrites have spiny hair That cracks and ...
May 5, 2011 -
Re: Only You
Hay dear! Sorry it took so long for my review, I deeply apologize. Though I have only slight practice in the poetry world, there are a few things that can ...
May 4, 2011 -
Re: Bair's Choice [rated 12+ for language]
I call it a short story, but... Anyway. This story has been rated 12+ for language. Please read at your own discretion. I wrote this a few months ago, then ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Simply Free
I like myself better When the lights are all off When the mirror is shattered Tucked away in some box When all of my thoughts Are written down on a ...
Feb 11, 2011 -
Re: Miz Madison
Great job! Only a few complaints. :} She was Mister Madison's wife, he'd jus' buy her more. Mr. Washington? My frein' told me how she overheard the boss talkin' to ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Romeo and Juliet: A Poem
Hay! Great job! The only thing I'd work on is your transition from Romeo to Juliet. If it wasn't meant to be a transition, then I'm sorry, but Romeo killed ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: Maybe
If you could see my face Every second of every day I bet it would change your attitude I bet it’d change what you say If you could see who ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: Mortuus Fatum
Hallo buddy! Glad to see you writing again! This time there were only a few grammar mistakes, so let's address them. Why I'm being so pulled to it? Why am ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: All Hath (Rated 12+ for intenseness)
Uh.... I don't write poetry. At all. EVER. I don't even know if it belongs in this category. But... here's what I tampered out this evening. And, it's supposed to ...
Dec 10, 2010 -
Re: Adam's Suicide Note
Rated 12+ for language and mention of death. Quick Info~ I randomly became intrigued with the idea of writing a suicide note. I liked this one, but I might write ...
Dec 1, 2010 -
Re: Frecar - Chapter 1: The Mysterious Old Man
Back to help with the new editing. And though I'm only a 15 year old boy, my name is known by all, and my wealth compares to no one else's. ...
Nov 25, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Eight (Part 2 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Missed Part 1 ? Anna took a moment to reminisce on her early childhood. It was so perfect, it seemed. Robert was an amazing ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Eight (Part 1 of 2)
Rated 21+ for fantasy and violence. When Anna woke up, she was surprised. She sat up a dizzingly rate, staring around in her frantic confusion. She thought for a few ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: The Inkheart Series
I thought that Inkheart was a really cool and original idea! I haven't read Inkdeath yet, but I'll get around to it I'm sure! Is it good? XD YES. I ...
Nov 24, 2010
