GoldenQuill

Mars!

I was always that person who typed with perfect grammar because I am a writer. When I found YWS and saw that it was a rule, I nearly cried with ...

Hay, it's Aushy here. :} Nitpicks "Come on Gaffney! Get in the car," I pleaded in an exasperated voice accompanied by a stupid grin that just wouldn't go away. "No," ...

Hay Lena, Aushy here. :} Nitpicks "Nah , you don't know me at all. And quit callin' me Danielle. Everybody 'round here jus' calls me ' Dan ' or ' ...

Hay Kan, it's Aushy here. :} First, let's get on to the nitpicks, then I'll give you your overall. ^.^ Nitpicks Soldiers, he thought. They can never hold their own ...

Why thank you. ^.^ 10

10 :}

You approach the beach with a smile and you pause on the boardwalk, listening to the sound of the waves crash against the shore and smelling the smell of the ...

Very good. I really enjoyed this. I only found one problem, but then I have one opinion. ^.^ “To my Love I have never met...?” This should be, "To my ...

Hay Sophie! :} Welcome to YWS! Yes, I am doing the Writer's Olympics too. Tons of fun, no? ^.^ Okay, so, I think I'm supposed to go over some basic ...

I was going through my posts, and when I saw that the last comment was, 'Someone will eventually have to read it... right?' I burst out laughing. ;P

She was only sure about one thing, and that was that it was black. It was black above her, below her, between her fingers and every strand of her curly ...

Here's me, randomly commenting again. ;P Okay, you know how in anime when people mention something bad that happened, they immediately tear up? I'm starting to feel that anime vibe ...

Okay, so, I've been reading your chapters for a while and not commenting, but now I'm going to. :} I'd just like to say that before, the whole thing where ...

Thank you guys so much for your reviews. :} Alright, so, Kay: I meant a name for the story, not a name for the girl. ;P But those are good ...