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  • Archive Re: To Save the World

    Name: Aushy Gender: Girl Age: Fourteen Appearance: Tall girl with dark brown wavy hair, and nearly black, smiling eyes. Her cheeks are constantly red, and her eyelashes are long. Beautiful ...

    Mar 19, 2010
  • General Fiction Novels Re: Black Rose-ch.1

    The pounding rain fell over the busy city. Night crawled its way through the streets. The lamps were dim m ed, and a few flickered. It was cold and chilly ...

    Mar 16, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: But That Couldn't Be Helped. It Never Could.

    Thank you all for your wonderful comments! :} I don't usually post works like this, because I don't usually write them. I usually write chapters in this way--short, mysterious, compelling. ...

    Mar 13, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: But That Couldn't Be Helped. It Never Could.

    Rated 12+ for mention of violence. She couldn't watch. Her eyes stung. Perhaps it was because she had been staring in wide-eyed terror for an hour. Or, perhaps, it was ...

    Mar 9, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Mia: Bruised and Beaten

    Hay, it's Aushy, here to review! :} Okay, so, I found this very interesting. It was short and sweet, yet somehow, you seemed to add mystery and wonder in it ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Chronicles of Losthurin-Chapter 2

    Hay there. Aushy here. :} I'm going to be a hypocrite and do the one thing I hate that people do--read the second chapter before the first and review it. ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 2 of 2)

    Rated 12+ for fantasy, violence, and mild language. The moment the town was in view Anna started at a dead run. “Anna!” Celine screamed after her, and took off as ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 1 of 2)

    Rated 12 + for fantasy, violence, and mild language. Dreams drifted in and out of Anna’s unconscious mind. Every time she thought the dream was ending and she’d finally wake ...

    Mar 6, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Swimming Against the Kolyma River

    Hay Lena! Sorry it took a while, but here's Aushy, here upon request. ^.^ This'll be the plot I'm following for your review: I. Review ---A. Nitpicks ---B. Critique II. ...

    Mar 4, 2010
  • Action/Adventure Novels Re: Chaos Theory: The Zombie Effect-- Chapter 1

    Aushy here, as requested! :} Here's both the prologue (short) and Chapter 1. Please review, this is my first story on this website!! Don't be afraid to be picky either. ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Assassin's Redemption Chapter 2 Part 1

    Aushy here! :} Here's the next part of my story. i just finished writing it so there's bound to be a lot of mistakes. I need a lot of advice ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Assassin's Redemption Chapter 1 Part 2

    Hay Kanen! Aushy here again, as requested. :} And here I go... Here's the second part of the chapter. I just finished typing it so there are bound to be ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Mistia's Terror (rated 12+ for mention of violence)

    [Okay, I was thinking of stopping a book that this is from, but after writing this, I'm having second thoughts. Critique me, but remember to tell me whether or not ...

    Feb 27, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: Loki's Revenge

    To be a bit contradictory, I loved the whole 'drip' thing. At first I thought it was blood, but when I realized it was venom I was all, "Ooh! Cool!" ...

    Feb 24, 2010
  • Historical Fiction Short Stories Re: TankMan

    Here is Aushy with her review. :} (That's me :[}) *I couldn't find any other place to put this. It's not based on any actual historical figure's point of view, ...

    Feb 21, 2010


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