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Re: To Save the World
Name: Aushy Gender: Girl Age: Fourteen Appearance: Tall girl with dark brown wavy hair, and nearly black, smiling eyes. Her cheeks are constantly red, and her eyelashes are long. Beautiful ...
Mar 19, 2010 -
Re: Black Rose-ch.1
The pounding rain fell over the busy city. Night crawled its way through the streets. The lamps were dim m ed, and a few flickered. It was cold and chilly ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: But That Couldn't Be Helped. It Never Could.
Thank you all for your wonderful comments! :} I don't usually post works like this, because I don't usually write them. I usually write chapters in this way--short, mysterious, compelling. ...
Mar 13, 2010 -
Re: But That Couldn't Be Helped. It Never Could.
Rated 12+ for mention of violence. She couldn't watch. Her eyes stung. Perhaps it was because she had been staring in wide-eyed terror for an hour. Or, perhaps, it was ...
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: Mia: Bruised and Beaten
Hay, it's Aushy, here to review! :} Okay, so, I found this very interesting. It was short and sweet, yet somehow, you seemed to add mystery and wonder in it ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Chronicles of Losthurin-Chapter 2
Hay there. Aushy here. :} I'm going to be a hypocrite and do the one thing I hate that people do--read the second chapter before the first and review it. ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 2 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy, violence, and mild language. The moment the town was in view Anna started at a dead run. “Anna!” Celine screamed after her, and took off as ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Three (Part 1 of 2)
Rated 12 + for fantasy, violence, and mild language. Dreams drifted in and out of Anna’s unconscious mind. Every time she thought the dream was ending and she’d finally wake ...
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Swimming Against the Kolyma River
Hay Lena! Sorry it took a while, but here's Aushy, here upon request. ^.^ This'll be the plot I'm following for your review: I. Review ---A. Nitpicks ---B. Critique II. ...
Mar 4, 2010 -
Re: Chaos Theory: The Zombie Effect-- Chapter 1
Aushy here, as requested! :} Here's both the prologue (short) and Chapter 1. Please review, this is my first story on this website!! Don't be afraid to be picky either. ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption Chapter 2 Part 1
Aushy here! :} Here's the next part of my story. i just finished writing it so there's bound to be a lot of mistakes. I need a lot of advice ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: The Assassin's Redemption Chapter 1 Part 2
Hay Kanen! Aushy here again, as requested. :} And here I go... Here's the second part of the chapter. I just finished typing it so there are bound to be ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Mistia's Terror (rated 12+ for mention of violence)
[Okay, I was thinking of stopping a book that this is from, but after writing this, I'm having second thoughts. Critique me, but remember to tell me whether or not ...
Feb 27, 2010 -
Re: Loki's Revenge
To be a bit contradictory, I loved the whole 'drip' thing. At first I thought it was blood, but when I realized it was venom I was all, "Ooh! Cool!" ...
Feb 24, 2010 -
Re: TankMan
Here is Aushy with her review. :} (That's me :[}) *I couldn't find any other place to put this. It's not based on any actual historical figure's point of view, ...
Feb 21, 2010
