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Re: Imagine
Have you ever wondered what a world with no boundaries would be like? A world with no walls, no ceilings, no floors. A world that had absolutely no restriction anywhere, ...
May 21, 2010 -
Re: Demon of Many Names (rated for drug use)
Good job! I really enjoyed this. I just caught one error . . . I'm was it's most vulnerable host. I couldn't leave it and now I am ghost. I'm ...
May 11, 2010 -
Re: Recollections (Prologue) Rewritten
So, I clicked on this because I recognized the title. Recollections, I thought. Didn't I read something titled like this? So I read the story, and nearly jumped out of ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: GoldenQuill's Tropical Shack of Reviewing [Accepting] :}
Open up for reviews! :}
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: Legion of Superheroes: Heartland Prologue
Hallo, it's Aushy, here for your review! :} My family and I had just moved to the United States from Ireland, because Mom had gotten a job as a secretary ...
Apr 26, 2010 -
Re: The Queen's Kingdom (rated 12+ for slight violence)
A short story originally written for English class, but it was too long. It needs a lot of work. Help, please? Would anybody believe her? "Apaula, stop it," her own ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: Passion, Love, and Absent-Mindedness
Upon thumbing through the dictionary and coming to the word 'passion,' one would find a defintion stating that it is a strong or extravagant fondness, enthusiasm, or desire for anything. ...
Apr 25, 2010 -
Re: To Save the World
(No godmodding?) Aushy She sat there for a terrifying moment before getting up and running again. "CUTTER!" she screamed, tripping. The fear was beginning to kill her, and she felt ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: GoldenQuill's Tropical Shack of Reviewing [Accepting] :}
Wonderful stories, guys! :}
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Walking Dead - Chapter 1 [EDITED]
Hallo, Aushy here for your review! :} Chapter 1 “So this must be the door , ” I murmured while looking at one of many doors a two-floor building had ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Chronicles of Losthurin-Chapter 1
Here is Aushy, finally here to review this one! I only found one nitpick. Just one. Kiera sighed and turned the page, ignoring the burning holes in her back that ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Misty Eyes: Chapter One
Hallo! It's Aushy, here for your review. :} So, let's visit nitpicks first. I'll do my corrections in red. :} I. Nitpicks Grammar “Don’t give me that look, Gerty!" Mist ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: Spring Rice
First off, I want to commend you on how good this is. This is a really fantastic piece of work, and in my opinion, your best yet. Good job! :} ...
Apr 21, 2010 -
Re: GoldenQuill's Tropical Shack of Reviewing [Accepting] :}
Anything that needs to be reviewed, anyone?
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Top 5 Worst Books You Ever Read
The Door Within, by Thomas Batson. It was poorly written. The Rise of the Wyrm Lord, by Thomas Batson. This book was pure torture. PURE. The Diary of Anne Frank, ...
Apr 14, 2010
