GoldenQuill

Hay, it's Aushy! Remember me? :} Let's just fix up some mistakes I caught while reading through this before we discuss lengthening it. ^^ “Lovely grounds to stroll through when ...

Hallo! :} I am Aushy, and I came to review something I didn't read the first part of. *guilt trip* Okay. “We’re in,” Rae whispers, breaking off some of the ...

And I did something I promised I'd never do; never, EVER, review just a random chapter in someone's book without even looking at the rest. Terribly sorry. As a reader ...

Hallo there. :} I'm Aushy, and I shall be reviewing your poem today. I'm not so good at poems, so let's see how I do reviewing them! So, it started ...

Hallo there, I'm Aushy, and I shall review this. :} This was really good. I did enjoy it. It was short and to the point. I'm hoping you'll make a ...

This a piece I submitted for Lilymoore's contest. My prompt picture was One of God's Mistakes . --- "Who do you think you are?" Ashley looked up from behind the ...

Wonderful stories everyone, keep 'em coming! :}

Hallo! Aushy here! :} Nice to meet you, and welcome to YWS. Grammar Yeah, I know. But, it must be attended to. He stood up, it was best not to ...

Open for reviews once again! :}

Rated 12+ for slight gore and mild language. A cold wind blew across the barren land and pushed the fires closer. Xavier's back was to the flames. He did not ...

Hay Hero! :} Good job. This poem, however, depressed me. I absolutely HATE Christians who are like that. 99% of Catholics are like that, too, so. Errg. Anyway. I could ...

Hi there. :} Aushy here for a review. Many of the grammatical errors the others pointed out, so I'll just get right down to the real, hardcover, review. Your description ...

Hallo. :} My name is Aushy, and I'm here to review your work today. This was . . . absolutely fantastic! Honestly, I'm not kidding! I love how you portrayed ...

Hi guys. Thank you all very much for reviewing my story! I do, however, have to comment. The point of this piece was to imagine. To imagine a world without ...

I sat in the car of my mom’s sea foam colored Toyota Sienna, clutching my Dunkin’ Donuts ice coffee tightly in my hand. It was just my mom and I, ...