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Re: The Lie of a Normal Life
It’s a lie. What’s a lie? Everything’s a lie. The sky is a lie, the air you’re breathing is a lie. The words on this paper and even the paper ...
Sep 23, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Seven (Part 2 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Part 1 ‘This is the year 101, and we are in the Southlands forest. The boy has the name of Mallegin Dess.’ None of ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Seven (Part 1 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. When Magic’s voice had died down within her mind, she was frozen, unable to think, move, or even choose an emotion. She felt like ...
Aug 22, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Six (Part 2 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Part 1 “Haven’t you been paying attention?” he asked sharply, all the emotion that had been eating his voice replaced with fury. “ ‘I’d ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Six (Part 1 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Darell’s history was a very interesting one. It started off deceitfully normal. Anna learned quickly that not only was Darell a distinguished actor, but ...
Aug 17, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Five (Part 2 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Part 1 “Wouldn’t it be just a shame if I missed that?” she asked, sarcasm thick in her voice. “Anna--” “Look.” Anna stood up ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Five (Part 1 of 2)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Snapping out of her frightened state, Anna opened her mouth to retort that she had absolutely nothing to hide and that Sympa was being ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: The Laws of Time Chapter 1: Genesis
Hallo, I'm here to comment on this story, because I adore Doctor Who and I'm bored. ;P As aforementioned about 578420570428502 times, this has very good description. I like it, ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: "Good Night, My Good Sir"
I never write poetry, so this is kind of an odd thing for me. Tell me how you like this. Critiques always welcome! She bids the world goodnight with her ...
Jul 22, 2010 -
Re: Faith (an excerpt)
Aloha! It's Aushy here, with my review, FINALLY. Sorry it took so long, I've been away. D: Nitpicks! “Would you like me to explain, or not,” I ask her, a ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Four (Part 2 of 3)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Missed Part 1? Find it here . It was only then that the words “and behind you is my husband” sunk in. Cautiously, Anna ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Four (Part 3 of 3)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. Missed Parts 1 and 2? Part 1 , Part 2 . Both the food and the water burned her lips, but she ignored the ...
Jul 20, 2010 -
Re: Limitless: Chapter Four (Part 1 of 3)
Rated 12+ for fantasy and violence. The image of the dream that Anna had been savoring slowly faded from her mind, like a picture that had been viewed too many ...
Jul 17, 2010 -
Re: The Death of Xavier's Heart
Thank you guys for all your lovely posts and pointers! Please check out this post right here, which kinda goes along with this one: Thanks! :}
Jul 14, 2010 -
Re: Alxy's Travels
Rated 12+ for fantasy, violence, and slight gore. This post goes along with The Death of Xavier's Heart . A cloud of smoke shrouded her, covering her vision and making ...
Jul 14, 2010
