GoldenAnderos

Thanks for all the great comments. Especially Drago's in-depth response. I fixed up the regret part so that it made more sense. Thanks for the tip. The thing I have ...

What are you all talking about? Copse is a word. Isn't it a group of trees or something? Anyway, great prologue. A little vague, though. Scuffling with her invisible bond, ...

It's interesting, but I found several distracting errors. The bold parts are my inserts. Prologue: On a pleasant spring Thursday (,) everything began to change. Ms.Carson’ (s) third (grade?) class ...

What a refreshing breather from the usual junk I read on a different website. It kept me interested throughout, and it is well written. I appreciate your writing style. Your ...

Thanks for all the reviews. I deleted it so I could revise it.