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  • Short Story » Humor, Dramatic Re: Exam Result

    Aw, thank you! You underestimate the effect of your own writing.

    Apr 12, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: The Book Man, Chapter 6 (Revised)

    Wait, hold on, this is totally random ... but I recall that Tolkien used the word "wagging" a lot, specifically in the Hobbit. Whether he was describing Bilbo's head or ...

    Apr 9, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Dishes: Part 1

    Oh, by the way, the horror-y part comes later. But I'm considering throwing that out. Gah. It got too complicated. :D

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Dishes: Part 1

    Thank you so much! For the compliments and the feedback and the insight in general--that was an amazing review! I'll make those changes; now that you say it, both parts ...

    Apr 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Dishes: Part 1

    Aw, thanks! I was kind of afraid that this'd be slow-paced, due to the lack of action. I also idolize Bradbury, and I didn't know I'm starting to sound like ...

    Apr 5, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Tolerance

    No problem!

    Apr 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Decision of Change, Pt. 4

    Oh, no pressure! They're not even major nitpicks :D. Sometimes I have this crazy idea that I need to impliment more dialogue, description--something different! Haha, I understand you. No matter ...

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: The Reality Syndrome

    Aw, thanks!

    Mar 30, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Warm as Ice, Chapter 2: Notus.

    Thanks, and no problem! (:

    Mar 25, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Vampiric; Final Chapter

    No problem! :D

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: -

    Trust me, your grammar is no worse than a lot of others' on here :D. I still can't believe it's not your first language. You're such an amazing writer :D. ...

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Short Story » General, General Re: -

    No problem! English isn't your first language? Wow. I feel very small.

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Evening

    No problem!

    Mar 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Past, Present, Future

    No problem! Great piece :D.

    Mar 18, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: him

    No problem! My pleasure. :D

    Mar 16, 2014


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