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Back again! You can't shake me loose! I love your style. The poetry woven through this, the breathtaking descriptions...the repetition...Have you submitted any poetry on here? The ominous ring glowed ...

Flame here! Happy Review Day! I couldn't help noticing that this possesses the same beginning as The Pendulum of Fate: BABOOM! BABOOM! To be honest, I'm generally against onomatopoeia beginnings. ...

Flame here! Go Icicles :D! Your piece had this very natural flow to it, you sliding effortlessly from one idea to the next. I also have to applaud you on ...

Flame here! Happy Review Day! I could tell, just through this 141-word chapter (yes, I counted :D...ish), that you'd make a fabulous poet. The repetition of words, the well-measured pace, ...

Flame here! Happy review day! I haven't read previous chapters, so this review is based solely off this one. I'm terrible at offering advice on plot development, anyway XD. SubtleSanity ...

Flame here, as promised! Another great chapter done by jls1638. Fluid, breathtaking descriptions, high vocabulary interfused with casual speech, well-measured pace. With a theme like this, I'd usually

Flame here! Happy review day! You have quite the handle on storytelling. Every detail contributes to the plotline, and your descriptions...breathtaking. Music woven through words. I also find the high

Flame here, as promised! I can't believe I liked this but didn't review it. Shame on me :D. It's been a long time since I reviewed this novel, so I ...

Frozen! I've got "Let it Go" playing in my head 'round the clock. "No right, no wrong, No rules for me; I’m free. Let it go! Let it go!" Was ...

As I read this, I was totally grinning, "The Hunger Games." Similarities: There's killing, rebellions, betrayal, and (most importantly) forced love. It starts with "make me believe that you love ...

Welcome to YWS! I hope you're enjoying your time here :D. I'll admit, I'm reluctant reviewing such a delicate topic. And a topic flooding the YWS All Literary section, at ...

My God, you do not know how eagerly I've been awaiting this. Fabulous job, once again. And I love how you devoted a whole chapter to Sirena's misery. The reader ...

Curious, I researched Prince John. This popped up: "John is today usually considered a 'hard-working administrator, an able man, an able general.' Nonetheless, modern historians agree that he also had

Flame here! Go Icicles :D! I see you've already received some fabulous reviews, so expect this one to be brief. I enjoyed this chapter more than the first, but I'm ...

Flame here, as promised! Alright, let me just jot down my first impression: I just didn't see much passive voice seeded into the paragraphs. And, yes, I know you were ...