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Something that's so black it looks blue. Ooh, and glossy, as well! Not sure what you call that.

Congrats! :D

I'm visiting England, too. XD I'm really excited for it, though. Sherlock, Harry Potter, Doctor Who. And, um, some historical sites, but those don't matter as much.

@cleverclogs, when I first saw your post, I read it as "Appalapachia." Doctor Who's taking over my mind. Both Appalachia and Appalapachia are gorgeous. :D

Ah, sorry. I wasn't clear. Break the paragraphs all you want, as long there's no unexpected piece of narration: "[Insert long narrative tale]." He blah blah ... blah blah blah, ...

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Hey, Moalex! I hope I'm not too late. Sir Arthur Conan Doyle used this loads, seeing as Sherlock Holmes solved most of his crimes without assistance. The Time Machine and ...

Thanks for the replies! ^.^ Ah, definitely; they're easier to read. But at the same time, they affect the pace, or that's just me? When I'm tossing in more detail, ...

Congrats, recreating! You deserve it. :D

How do I fatten up my paragraphs? I've tried fluff, but that doesn't work; I get stuck. I look at them, and I feel like I'll get a paper cut ...

Ugh. First drafts. Why do they exist? I edit more than I write, which works, since my old document's bursting like a bullfrog. As for advice, I can't give much, ...

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I'm tempted to say "an unlimited supply of mechanical pencils and college-ruled notebooks." But world hunger. I ache whenever I see photos of kids who're starving. After that, it's selfish. ...

Welcome to YWS! :D Any questions, we're happy to help. (That sounded less creepy in my head.) The staff's anyone that's not dark blue (neon green, dark green, red, light ...