GoldFlame

Poetry : Edgar Allan Poe, Emily Dickenson, e.e. cummings, the Odyssey (by Homer) Satire : The Hitchhiker's Ultimate Guide to the Galaxy (Douglas Adams - highly recommend!) Typical Fantasy : ...

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Title says it all.

Completed! Who's next?

Completed!

I'll do... Any genre, any format. Satire, historical fiction, haikus. I'm more familiar with prose, but I'll review poetry, as well. And prose poetry. I won't do... Pieces with 4+ ...

Thanks! I only recently began writing poetry, so I absorb constructive criticism like a sponge. Don't be afraid to be harsh. So here it is: Gift of the Angel or ...

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Hi! You'll love it here, I bet you anything.

Pacing? I always encounter a problem with that. My beginnings tend to be slow and my middles fast. The solution is details: fleshing out description. "That made him angry." How ...

You do not know how much I agree with you. It's more important to be well-acquainted with the words in your vocabulary. I mean, who'd prefer "her pulchritudinous physiognomy" over ...

The quantity of description determines the pace. Excessive description is classified as "filler," meaning that it's wholly unnecessary for us to read. For example, Stephenie Meyer's writing. We're jus

Since I wasn't introduced to the conflict, I'll refer to my Fluency Nazi instinct to review. You're off to a great start! Suspenseful, interesting, and your descriptions were neither too ...

With first, it's far easier to get attached to the character. You possess the opportunity to explore their thoughts and emotions, and developing them requires little effort. Unfortunately, there's no ...

I'll review one of your works if you review Invisible Echo . Don't be afraid to be harsh or overly detailed :D!